Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Thanatos Revised (dubstep)]

Darkness mixed with fear, I LIKE IT

Good job, the drop is sexy! I felt the darkness at the beginning and you topped it off with the argh reinforcing that fear/darkness present in the track! Nice job.

Tips:
1) Turn up your snares or add another snare ontop with a slight reverb, its gotta have more of a snap to it, well it doesn't have to, but it could work nicely :)
2) ALSO WHAT IS THAT MELODY AT THE END??? Man, you gotta do something with that! If not send it my way and i'll turn it into something! :P
3) Bit of reverb on the instrument at the beginning but add it as the track progresses so its very subtle, would add more depth to the track
4) Vary up the beat a little more at the first drop, so its 1 1 then beat 2 beat 3 or something, just a bit of variety so llike instead of 1 kick then snare have 2 kicks then snare

Hope the advice above helps a bit ^^

ET16 responds:

Thanks for the tip....

[_-Euphoria-_ (WIP)]

Yarp!

Very nice, I like this! Keep up the good work.

Tips:
1) Fade in instruments e.g. 0:26, maybe add a filter to it, then have it come out more and more towards the drop to build it
2) When he says huh, drop any snares and background sound, maybe keep the melody but the build up snares have to be dropped, try it and see how it sounds!
3) Make it longer? :P

E-o-e responds:

Cheer for the feedback! Sorry the reply is a little late, and I will try that :L

[Produce (unmastered-fresh)]

Dark and gritty, nice!

Ye I like it mate, the effects are nicely done and the track feels good!

Just a few pointers:
1) Add a cymbal on the drop to add more emphasis to it, doesn't have to be over the top loud
2) Add more power to the drop, you could even layer your bassy instrument with other bassy instruments, just experiment a bit and you can get a much fuller, fatter sound!
3) Add some melodies to the intro?

ScionForge responds:

Thank you very much :P

Yeah i got that really evil vibe in there i love it ahaha

that was my first attempt at using a bitcrusher so i didnt change the levels or anything at all, if i spend more time on it thats what i'll do :P

[MD2010-Fathom]

Pretty wild!

Haven't heard something quite like this before! Pretty nuts stuff man :D I like it!! The song has a very fast pace to it, the drums are pretty cool and vary a lot, the wobbles are pretty nasty and the melodies do change here and there so good job on that!

What you need to work on a bit is the structuring of the track, perhaps have a few more buildups in there somewhere, the volumes of the hi hats need to be lowered, they are too loud when the first drop kicks in, in dubstep the wobble is always the forefront of everything, or so i find, so turn up the volume of the wobbles or emphasise the power on them and it will add a lot more depth to the track! Heck even vary it, have some bits with a less powerful wobble than others.

All in all a cool track, good luck in the competition mate and keep up the good work! :)

superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks for the advice, i was on line about the volumes of everything and was pretty indecisive on the volumes of things. probably because i was compressing everything. i think when i have more time ill go over the whole thing and master it with the advice u gave me. thanks once again.

[SpK*) - Staffmembers]

Solid & creative!

Has a very nice vibe to it with an awesome drum beat! You need to vary up that melody that which plays throughout (clearest heard at 1:12), that will spicen up the song further :) Perhaps do add a surprise drop in there but its not essential as you said its a lighter dubstep!

Good work! Sounds different from the usual stuff on newgrounds, keep it up :)

[Blutterbunged]

Potential

Sorry about the late review! Kept getting caught up in other stuff!

The synth is cool, the melodies are dark and twisted and it generally has that dark atmosphere which im assuming you were aiming for! The drums are cool, the volume levels are ok, so all in all not a bad track!

Things you need to work on or perhaps do in future:
- Less repetition, vary the drums up a bit, change the chord progression perhaps
- The phaser gets tedious after a while! Perhaps remove it at some point and add in a new drum beat to accompany the phaser-less section which will sound like a new section?
- Add some effects (maybe a monster growl or something) and some cymbals etc.
- New instruments, perhaps a dark twisted piano or bell instrument playing some eerie high notes

Can't think of much else atm, keep working at it! :)

Lemme know if you want anymore reviews! :D

[J+Ø: SCKR(Low) >Master< RD2010]

Fucking hell mate! :D

This is great! The drop is so much fuller now than before! The drums are very nice too! The wobbles are the highlight, so awesome!! People are going to love this track :) The first drop was simply o_O the way it came in and just tears shit apart! Damn man! Great work! :D

Send me the version you want on youtube! :)

Keep up the good work mate! 5/5 10000000/10

mr-jazzman responds:

Haha thanks broski, glad you liked it! =) I'll send you this track ASAP (more vids = more views = more exposure ;) )

[Cotd - (title Pending) Demo]

Ye man! I'm digging this!! :)

Great piano melody, nice and varies! Gets better and better as it goes!! However, its laking a bit of passion, the emotion is there but the passion and the flare is needed! Vary the velocities of the notes to make it sound like a real piano! You must must do this!! Can't stress how much difference it creates with a piano songs passion!!

Where to go from here you say? Well maybe have a solid drum beat come in with the piano re-introduced + a bass..? Or perhaps some sort of guitar with a drum beat accompanying the piano?

Keep up the good work! Really nice!

DjRin responds:

Yeah bro I know what you mean, I'm gettin' better at making a more organic piano song

Maybe... I'll just make a new song and smash em together. or something

but thanks for the feedback :) cool to see like a year n some later I'm gettin feedback!

[I Get The Blues]

He is the one o_O

You have broken the newgrounds audio portal and made it into the top 5... please, will you teach me the forces of the dark side?

[xKore - Syntax]

Can't get enough of this stuff!

Wow just wow dude! You are a true dubstep ninja!! This is awesome man! o_O I can't find any faults with the track, it is all round awesome!! Keep up the good work! :)