Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[13th floor]

Nice

I like the use of effects, make it sound very abstract :) add some more power to your kicks at the beginning, i like the varying dynamics within the beat, make it sound really cool, the drop at 01:26 is different but still pretty ace like the climax but then its just straight back to the earlier part, maybe you could have added something in there to finish the build up with a nice new section and take away from the main ideas of the song momentarily, that way you will eliminate the repetition,

but apart from that its pretty decent

keep up the good work :)

9/10 (composition)
5/5 (use of instruments)

[Hejehuja (hardbass song!)]

wow, feel that bass :D

you deserve more than what rating 2.16 you currently have, its a nice piece with a lot of potential, i think at this point all that matters is that you can string from one idea to another and enjoy the freedom of making music, because it sounds more original this way and artists who enjoy something different will pick up on this which is a good thing because no one wants to be the same, however if you did develop a more moderate form to the song, i.e. if it followed the widely used structure for this genre of music then people will like it more because they will see it as more familiar, anyway im blabbing on, what you need to do is add some emphasis on your build up and vary your dynamics (volumes), plus that screechy sound at 01:25 ish is quite painful on the ears so maybe sort that out, but ye otherwise sounds decent, i think build up the bass whilst quietly building up and putting in the main synth instruments and ideas in there somewhere so it all builds together then you can have them all drop together rather than stopping the song at 01:08 to enter a new section, it will help the rhythm and flow of the song

but ye theyre just my ideas

i like the song, keep up the good stuff :)

8/10 (composition)
5/5 (ideas)

[Exit Wound]

Sounds kl

ye it sounds alright however im not really a fan of the genre so will try to review fairly, the drops were very nice, perhaps drop the volume on your hi hats a little and increase the power of your kicks and/or add a drum and bass style beat to fill in half of the song blending it with what you already have, like at 2:40 where the beat changed was very nice, if it were to drop into something a bit faster paced like dnb style beat then it will give the song more energy sorta thing, but ye thats just my opinion, good stuff mate, keep it up :)

8/10 (for overall composition)
5/5 (for effort)

Ookami-Kun responds:

Thanks, I'll take that into account - it may have been the first constructive review I've ever had on Newgrounds!

[DJ Clayface - Above Clouds 3.0]

sounds good to me

i like the polyphonic feel with the melody on the synth running around like that giving a great sense of positivity and life/energy to the piece :D

gobsmacked at 01:22, that melody sounds off the hook, especially when the next section comes in :D

love the variety too, normally too much change in one song doesnt sound great but the energy of this song just makes something like that perfect, like a massive adventure on some super roller coaster across the world or something :D

good stuff mate, keep it up and lemme know if you do decide to make another version :)

[-(!< Club DragonX >!)-]

Has a nice vibe to it

Orientalish, lots of energy and very positive, sounds really nice mate.

Perhaps add some like whooshing sounds when transitioning from one part to another, other than that its pretty spot on mate

Keep up the good stuff

IndieDance responds:

yehh! i like the oriental part =]

i think it makes it different n fun.

=]

thanks!

[-={dj-phx}=- Energy Demo]

Decent

Nicely blended chords in the background adding ambience and the main gate instrument sounds fine too

Perhaps add a new section with some different instruments and like a mad build up with loadsa energy flow at the end, just an idea

Keep up the good stuff :)

unrealdark responds:

Alright, thanks for the devined information, I will see what I can do to change it.
Thanks for the review. ;)
And will do! ;D

[{3rd Sun} z75]

The giant turtle told me to do it

Maybe add some more bass to the drums its sounding sorta absent, i think youve got rid of the lower band sounds on them but thats just my opinion

Otherwise good stuff mate, im looking forward to hearing more from you in the future

Respect

p.s. review my song if you can http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/184197

Xorberax responds:

Thanks, and im going to add more bass to the drums now.

EDIT - ALOT more bass in the song now.

[I Felt The Ground Shake]

Sounds good to me

ye ambient sounds kl i think or maybe miscellaneous/video game?

i like the melodies and the use of instruments but maybe get rid of that bell because its gettin annoyin lol, the big one that opens dum dum dum dum and so forth, i like the bit that comes in around 0:36 maybe use that more frequently or re introduce it or even make a totally seperate song using it but ye its decent

anyway good stuff mate, keep it up :)

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TecHCrom3 responds:

yay, thanks man i will check it out.

Yours truly
-TecHCrom3-

[He's A Pirate Metal]

Nice one

Ahh gotta love this tune but ye like the other guy said its not completely written by you so i cant give you more than 8/10 but if you invent your own melody and carry it forward then all my 10s belong to you :)

Keep up the good work tho

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IronAngel1991 responds:

lol, thanks.
I'll be sure to check out your song

[Sadja's Soul]

Decent

Sounds good to me :)