Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[kirby 3 - Sand Canyon]

nice melodies

create your own drum pattern rather than using loops, it will sound so much better and more creditable

keep up the good work

[Midna's.Desperate.Hour. (test)]

Sounds cool

Just add a drop to the end with a fat off beat jumping in + similar synth to what you started with and it will sound pro

keep up the work

[Floating in the Sea of Time]

spot on

sounds wicked, good work mate

[Space club]

sounds funky

nice work, keep it up =)

[Bloody Undead]

ye sounds cool

keep up the work ;)

["June"]

sounds good to me

decent drum pattern and decent drum beat

change 2:11 onwards ish cos it doenst realy fit in with the song + perhaps involve new instruments maybe

but ye keep up the good work

asmorbidus responds:

thanks.

- Mike

[The Sellout Point]

half decent

instruments + beat sound good but you need to sort out that melody man, its too sinister and evil plus involve that instrument you have at the end more, it sounds cool

just adjust the melody to sound more melodical rather than off key and disonant (=random) and it will sound a lot better

keep up the work mate

[Out Tro]

sounds cool

i like it, solid drum beat drives the song along, nice riffs,

add some slight reverb at the beginning and add a few new melodies at parts to keep people continuously interested but dont put in too much or it will sound like several songs, perhaps introduce some new instruments in the second half, but ye its cool man just a bit of tweaking needed

keep up the good work =)

church187 responds:

Thanks man i will keep it up. Next will be better...

[[World's begin]]

its cool

ye man it sounds alright and i can see you put in the effort so nice one, very dark song but i guess thats what you were aiming for

a few tips on how to evolve your song further, play around with volume levels a bit to blend parts together then you will be able to get rid of choppy feel, get a solid drum pattern plus sort out some sort of arrangement to the song to make it sound less experimental unless you prefer it this way

but ye its almost there mate, keep up the work

=)

(p.s. have a listen to some matrix tracks, they sound very similar, maybe you could pick up some ideas)

[Manga Maniac]

sounds nice

an instrumental alone would be awesome, dont think you needthe manga maniac singing woman but still alright

keep up the work