Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DrumBug - Battery]

Good stuff!

QUALITY!!!! :D the track started out and I had no idea where it was gonna go then suddenly a small drop with a sexy beat and some nice melodies/synths jump in, great stuff! Felt refreshing! The changes in instruments and messing about with the wobbles kept the track interesting, good stuff! Keep up the good work! My only pointer would be that you could perhaps introduce a breakdown section and another buildup to make it a bit more dynamic rather than keeping the energy constant throughout!

DrumBug responds:

Hey :D
Thanks for the positive review dude :)
I'll to put a breakdown in there somewhere... But it'll be hard to thihk where to put it :?

But again thanks for the beaming review :)

[Bleed [Dubstep Full]]

Almost there!

This track has a nice sound effect thing going on, the rhythm is cool aswell but you need to add some variation dude and a monsterous drop at some point and it'll be sick! Keep at it mate and set me a pm when you make any new dubstep :)

CRomDayLeR responds:

sure I will sent you a PM!
thx for the review

[1010101010(dubstep)]

You are one sick FUCK (in the good sense :P )

This track is pretty decent! I was just sat there at the start listening to the melodies praying that you would follow it up with a drop and you did!! Great stuff! The beat is also awesome!

A few pointers to make the track even better:
- Have the wobble come through a tad more on the higher frequencies
- I dunno why but the wobble sounds kinda distant at the moment!
- Have a bass come through to support the wobbles or promote the lower frequencies of the wobble like really low frequencies but I think you'd be better off adding a seperate bass, take the lowest frequency a notch down in the kick and the wobble and in that space you've created, put a hefty hefty bass!! If you want an example gimme a shout and I'll link you to a track that demonstrates what I'm on about

Apart from these, good stuff! Keep up the work my dubstep friend :)

p.s. keep me updated with your tracks!

superuberinsaneausm responds:

i really need to learn how to equalize my wobbles, i was tryin to get em loud but that just made it so i cant hear anything...

[The Great Sea [RAC4]]

Fucking awesome dude!!!

You've pretty much nailed it! :) The synth used sound very similar to stuff I've heard played in holiday resorts in Turkey! So I have to agree when you say you've nailed the mediterranean feel! Great stuff! The drop towards to the end and that synth that comes in, fucking awesome!!! So SO sexy!! Great stuff! Good luck in the contest :)

djInTheDark responds:

Thanx a lot dude, glad you liked it. I really wanted the engineering for the pads to be as actuate to style as possible while still being original. I had a lot of fun with this one and am almost annoyed at myself for not saving it for my album coming up as for it was a very good turn out for this one. The bass towards the end is my favorite part and the most fun creating.

Thanx for the review!

[Monkeys Drinking Tea]

FOOOL!!!!!

You just wanted the review so that you could get a ten didn't you! :P Pretty sick!! Theres slight ermm not distortion but static on the guitar at parts? Dunno if thats the right word but it makes like a horrible cackling sound! Sort that out which is probably recording side and add a nice drum beat to accompany it and sorted! Sounds like a track from Dynasty Warriors 3 or something!

Very cool indeed!

JackRocker responds:

hahahahaaaa, thanks a lot man. yeah, i can kinda hear the static at times. we had our recording volume up a bit too high, and also, we suck at mastering. we've also decided to go in a different direction with our music, so we probably won't revisit this track, or make anything that sounds like it, but it's great to get feedback on it regardless, because it shows us what people think of our playing abilities. thanks a lot for this review. and if you ever need a review of your own, feel free to hit me up with a PM, and i'll drop you one.

[MechaKnight [EC]]

WICKED!!!

Proper arcade old school dude! Awesome stuff! The melodies are pretty funky and the instruments sound wicked! (:

What would make it even crazier is if you had some MAD ABSOLUTELY FUCKING CRAZY drum and bass drop come in randomly with some hefty bass!!!!

That would seal the deal for me! :D

Keep up the good work!

EmperorCharlemagne responds:

I suppose you'll have to wait for the Arranged Sound Track for that one to come out, lol :p

[Saber's Theme [Anya]]

Cool!

Ye I like it, the piano is awesome! The melodies fit very nicely and all the other stuff goes nicely! The snare roll at the start or like the first gets a bit repetitive after a while, you could vary it up or vary up the dynamics! The piano part is by far my favourite! The other instruments sound a bit old school synth style, add some reverb to give them a bit more depth perhaps? Or play with the dynamics? I'm sure you could make them sound nicer! :)

Take the piano part, add some dynamics and make it LONGER!!!! :D

Good stuff! Keep up the good work! :)

EmperorCharlemagne responds:

Yeah, I kinda wish this was longer too, but I didn't have anything left in me for this piece after a minute (don't ya hate when that happens?).

But yeah, thanks for the critiques, I keep on fiddling around with stuff and settings, so hopefully, I'll finally be able to get a good sound one of these days.

Thanks for the review!

[[P] - Syndrome (Preview)]

Wicked!

Sounds pretty sick! I especially like the drums + the transitions! Pretty impressive stuff :D

One pointer is the mastering of the track, you need to work on this but then again this comes after the track is finished so when its all done it will be an all round dirty track!!!!! Love the wobbles that come in later on in the track aswell! Give it a fresh feel!

Keep up the great work!

Pezmobile responds:

i did a bit of mastering already but not too much. So far i added more FX and simple things to the song to make it better. I also turned down the distortion on the drums but theres still a littile cus in my opinion that creates the whole feel of the track.

I'll PM u with the finished version, just have to finish the mastering,

[P]

[Mechanical Brawl]

Drums are banging!

I like it dude! The drums are fucking sick!! You need to put some sort of fat drop in there somewhere! Infact, it is already present at 1:06, you just need to put emphasis on it, have the section before perhaps a tad less powerful, take out the drums perhaps or put a high filter on the track with a snare roll of some sort introducing 1:06 and then bam you've just given the track double the power it had before! Drum and bass is similar to trance and dubstep in the sense that it has a buildup followed by a powerful drop, re-arrange parts of this track and it will sound awesome! Not even that difficult to do dude and it'll sound mighty awesome! :)

Keep up the good work dude! I will check in on your stuff from time to time and drop you some reviews if they are helpful :D

Numi responds:

Can't believe I've missed your reviews, man. I just checked all my old work and was surprised to see a few positive comments on 'em. I see tons more flaws in this song =(
I plan on re-doing a bunch of Breakcore/DnB some time real soon. Glad you were able to enjoy the track, man =D

[Reflections >Dubstep<]

o_O :D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D:YAYAYAYAYAAAY

Awesome stuff dude, you really packed a punch in this song! The piano is spot on!! I could sit here all day and listen to that piano, the way you incorporated it is genius! Nice to hear you using the yaya stuff aswell =) The breakdown was quite nice aswell, though I reckon a reintroduction of the piano at that point would be rather cool. If you brought this in some more then it would be easier to recognize the song for users, for example, if I was to have to hum back a piece of the song or the main melody/body of it, it would be difficult as there is so much going on. Use that piano later on in the song aswell and bam, you've got something that the listener will be able to familiarise/acquaint to the song... and the piano is awesome... dunno if i already said that :D

The progression of the song is pretty nice, it varies nicely adding a lot of excitement and mystery to the piece, making it difficult to predict which is pretty decent. Add in perhaps a vocal sample of some chinese guy saying something cool or someone important saying a quote or something, then add shit loads of delay on one of the words, or the final word in the sentence and smack that into your second build up from 2:33 onwards, like how a lot of artists on ukfdubstep build up their stuff. With the synth at like 3:31ish, you could vary it up by at the end of the 4th bar of the melody having a rhythm change perhaps mimicking the bass :)

Awesome work dude! Can you send me a midi version of the piano so that I can put my own spin on it, if thats cool?? :D

mr-jazzman responds:

Wow! Thank you so much for the generous review and suggestions. I like em! I dunno if I'll be changing much with this track now (aside from a less loud, better-mastered and better-EQed version sometime in the future), but you definitely have some points. The funny thing is, I actually wanted this track to repeat a little bit, but it just evolved into this progression of ideas that I couldn't help but produce -- hence, a sort of "dubstep mess" lol. This isn't to say I don't like what I did, it's just a little bit more progessive than I had hoped lol. I will certainly take your suggestions into consideration, because you make a great point: A motif repeated through the song makes it memorable. And, glad you loved dis one! =)))

P.S. I'd be more than happy to send you a MIDI of the piano to work with! Remix time, ooooooo yeah! ;)