Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Edge of Faith]

This is a really decent remix

I've been hooked on the mirror's edge theme for a long time and after hearing various remix gotta say this is one of the best :) one point of criticism is maybe add a light bass around 2:00, apart from that its very good

Keep up the good work

by the way, who done the vocals? (was it a synthesizer or real person)

NemesisTheory responds:

You and me both! First time I heard that after the first trailer i was really amazed :O

i tried playing with bass, but it somehow never stuck or took the song in another direction :/ i would've added it if it stuck, but maybe i messed up somewhere, i dont know XD

anyway, I'm glad you liked it!
about the vocals, I did those! :D

[Exit Wound]

Sounds kl

ye it sounds alright however im not really a fan of the genre so will try to review fairly, the drops were very nice, perhaps drop the volume on your hi hats a little and increase the power of your kicks and/or add a drum and bass style beat to fill in half of the song blending it with what you already have, like at 2:40 where the beat changed was very nice, if it were to drop into something a bit faster paced like dnb style beat then it will give the song more energy sorta thing, but ye thats just my opinion, good stuff mate, keep it up :)

8/10 (for overall composition)
5/5 (for effort)

Ookami-Kun responds:

Thanks, I'll take that into account - it may have been the first constructive review I've ever had on Newgrounds!

[-(!< Club DragonX >!)-]

Has a nice vibe to it

Orientalish, lots of energy and very positive, sounds really nice mate.

Perhaps add some like whooshing sounds when transitioning from one part to another, other than that its pretty spot on mate

Keep up the good stuff

IndieDance responds:

yehh! i like the oriental part =]

i think it makes it different n fun.

=]

thanks!

[-={dj-phx}=- Energy Demo]

Decent

Nicely blended chords in the background adding ambience and the main gate instrument sounds fine too

Perhaps add a new section with some different instruments and like a mad build up with loadsa energy flow at the end, just an idea

Keep up the good stuff :)

unrealdark responds:

Alright, thanks for the devined information, I will see what I can do to change it.
Thanks for the review. ;)
And will do! ;D

[{3rd Sun} z75]

The giant turtle told me to do it

Maybe add some more bass to the drums its sounding sorta absent, i think youve got rid of the lower band sounds on them but thats just my opinion

Otherwise good stuff mate, im looking forward to hearing more from you in the future

Respect

p.s. review my song if you can http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/184197

Xorberax responds:

Thanks, and im going to add more bass to the drums now.

EDIT - ALOT more bass in the song now.

[I Felt The Ground Shake]

Sounds good to me

ye ambient sounds kl i think or maybe miscellaneous/video game?

i like the melodies and the use of instruments but maybe get rid of that bell because its gettin annoyin lol, the big one that opens dum dum dum dum and so forth, i like the bit that comes in around 0:36 maybe use that more frequently or re introduce it or even make a totally seperate song using it but ye its decent

anyway good stuff mate, keep it up :)

p.s. review my song if you can http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/184197

TecHCrom3 responds:

yay, thanks man i will check it out.

Yours truly
-TecHCrom3-

[He's A Pirate Metal]

Nice one

Ahh gotta love this tune but ye like the other guy said its not completely written by you so i cant give you more than 8/10 but if you invent your own melody and carry it forward then all my 10s belong to you :)

Keep up the good work tho

p.s. review my song if you can http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/184197

IronAngel1991 responds:

lol, thanks.
I'll be sure to check out your song

[-={DJ-PHX}=- Fantasy Island]

Very nice

i think someone 0 bombed this song, its awesome tho should be higher rated, i like the melodies and the flow of the song, gives an image of a nice broad countryside full of animals and wildlife and a massive river + waterfall running through the middle of it and like a person with wings flying over it, lol but ye if you got me thinking like that then heck this is 10/10.

keep up the good stuff and let me know when you make something new

unrealdark responds:

Man, yeh it got 0 bombed in the butt. xD
But thanks for the compliments, and your imagination into the song! I've never thought of that.

Als thx for the 10! ;)
<3

[[Reign of the Empyre] (Raw)]

intro felt slow

and heard a bit of distortion here and there + very repetitive, got a tad borin after a while no real build up or nothin or any major transitions or chord changes, implement some of these and i reckon it would sound a lot better, plus make that piano melody more excitin

dj-KDUB responds:

i reckon it would.... but it is a raw. i dont even know how it made top 30

[Oijoink - EOTG]

Love the experimental

dnno for some reason normally i dont like experimental music but this is nice, sort of a dark trance song, sounds good :)

make it longer tho dude, this tune is worth workin on, its somethin original and new to the genre

Oijoink responds:

Thanks man :) But it's finished :)